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Peter’s Commentary on the ‘First Dates’ Edition
This past week, the Friday Sketch War topic was “First Dates”. We had three sketches this time around: mine, Mr. Porter’s, and Mr. Robertson’s. All in all, I’m happy with how my sketch came out. Like the previous week, I was trying to move away from traditional scene-y sketches, and trade off plot for funny.…
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Ken’s Entry: First Date – Honesty
INT RESTAURANT – NIGHT JACK a man in his early 30’s, sits alone at table wearing a business suit with a cocktail in front of him. He checks his breath, checks his appearance in the back of a spoon of any other convenient shiny object, and all manner of things someone waiting to make a…
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Sketch War, "First Dates" Edition, Peter’s Entry
Friday Sketch War First-Dates Edition “Thirteen Ways a First Date Can Go Wrong” FADE IN: TITLE GRAPHIC reads “Thirteen Ways a First Date Can Go Wrong”. CHEERY BOSSA NOVA MUSIC plays throughout. This is the only audio. FULL-SCREEN GRAPHIC reads “Thirteen Ways a First Date Can Go Wrong: #1”. INT. RESTAURANT – NIGHT NEIL and…
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The First Date
EXT. GARDEN – DAY Lush, jungle-like. Three tree stumps conveniently positioned as table and chairs. ADAM, grinning like a rube, and LILITH sit naked across from each other, hair and branches strategically concealing naughty bits. The brunette smolders and looks slinky even while seated. ADAM …and I call those goats. LILITH They stink. ADAM Yeah,…