Raoul and Dave Confuse the World, Episode 25


Hi all — here’s my take on the “Radio Drama” edition of Sketchwar.

Side note: I’m always a little iffy on how to format audiodrama. I like to use a bastardized screenplay format that’s mostly dialog, SFX (for sound effects), and MUSIC (for music cues). Hopefully it reads okay.

(Additional side note: this idea originated here.)

FADE IN: 

MUSIC: Introductory music.

NARRATOR

And now, the further adventures of everyone’s favorite globe-trotting performance artists! It’s time for “Raoul and Dave Confuse the World!”

MUSIC: Ominous music.

NARRATOR

Last week, in the final moments of their Azyrian mission, Raoul and Dave were captured by the beautiful-but-deadly Lieutenant Razzen.

RAZZEN speaks precise but faintly accented English. A femme fatale type.

RAZZEN

So. Raoul and Dave. At last, I see the terrorists face-to-face.

DAVE

We’re not terrorists.

RAOUL

Unless we’re terrorists of the mind! Blowing up your complacency! With art!

DAVE

Raoul, seriously: stop. Lietenant, we’re not a threat.

RAZZEN

You were responsible for the balloon animals in Mogadishu, yes?

RAOUL

Maybe.

RAZZEN

... and the fake Northern Lights in Venezuela?

RAOUL

That was pretty cool.

DAVE

But it never hurt anybody!

RAZZEN

It was very silly!

RAOUL

Thanks!

RAZZEN

Our regime does not abide silliness. Whatever you were plotting here, the Great Leader would not approve.

SFX: A switchblade clicks open.

RAOUL

Ahhh that’s a knife!

NARRATOR

Meanwhile, Dave employs his stage-magic skills to slip out of his ropes and deploy a smoke grenade!

SFX: FOOM!

Everyone coughs.

RAOUL

Quick, untie me!

RAZZEN

You’ll never get away with this!

SFX: Alarms sound.

SFX: Racing footsteps echo down a hallway.

NARRATOR

Our heroes escape from the complex, with one short side trip.

DAVE

Wait!

RAOUL

But -- knife lady!

DAVE

That room has our stuff.

SFX: A door opens.

DAVE

There’s the activator! Just hit the red button.

SFX: Beep!

RAOUL

I did it! So... we won?

GUARD

(muffled)

I think they went this way!

DAVE

We gotta get out of here first.

NARRATOR

Meanwhile, across Azyria, the machines that Dave and Raoul carefully set in place each receives the signal and turned themselves on.

SFX: Street noise and chatter.

SON

So the sky isn’t really blue?

SFX: A loud click and a whirr.

DAD

Son, it’s actually something called Rayleigh scattering, and --

SFX: POP!

SON

What’s that?

SFX: POP! POP!

DAD

What’s what?

SFX: Millions of pops!

SFX: The background chatter turns into ‘oohs’ and ‘aahs’.

SON

Bubbles! Lots of bubbles!

DAD

Wow.

SFX: General laughter and merriment

NARRATOR

And so, as Azyria’s cities are filled will millions of iridescent soap bubbles, our heroes emerge from one of the compound’s escape tunnels, only to find...

SFX: Heavy door creaks open.

SFX: Helicopter rotors.

RAOUL

A helicopter?

HELICOPTER MAN

Get in!

SFX: Raoul and Dave clamber into the helicopter.

SFX: The helicopter door shuts.

SFX: The rotors speed up as the ‘copter takes off.

RAOUL

Wait. You guys aren’t from the USPAA.

HELICOPTER MAN

Nope.

DAVE

Azyrians?

HELICOPTER MAN

Ha, no.

RAOUL

Who are you?

An old ITALIAN MAN clears his throat.

ITALIAN MAN

We’re with the Pope.

MUSIC: Dramatic chords!

MUSIC: Closing music.

NARRATOR

Will our heroes escape the clutches of the Azyrian forces? Will aiborne soap bubbles blow Azyria’s collective mind? And what shadowy purpose does the Vatican have planned for Raoul and Dave?

MUSIC: Closing music gets louder.

NARRATOR

Find out in the next installment of “Raoul and Dave Confuse the World!”

FADE OUT: